Tuesday, November 13, 2007
TKAM Paragraph (corrected)
Dill hates the way the people of Maycomb speak to the Blacks. He mostly notices it in the court room when Atticus and Mr. Gilmer are questioning Tom Robinson. "Hasn't anybody got any business talkin' like that, it just makes me sick." said Dill to Scout. Atticus speaks to all Negroes especially Tom with such kindness, Mr. Gilmer speaks with hate and mocks Tom by calling him boy and that what made Dill so upset. Talking to Blacks in a curtly manner will really upset and make Dill sick.
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4 comments:
it was pretty good. a few typos like ti whuch should be to but good job
good job i liked it there is a few misspelled words and u need a space by your comma other than that nice
that was a beautiful paragraph....you said suck instead of such and another one somewhere....but other than that I thought it was good! great job!
Nice job Katie. Like they said, you have some typos but overall it's good. You followed the prompt really good.
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